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Chameleon Upadhyaya Posted 13 years ago
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My father has been struggled his whole life to get us a higher education. He is a hardworking man and always made sacrifices to his kids for their better life and better future. This is a small beautiful family we have made it together.

I always had a dream of becoming a successful female writer in my life unfortunately I couldn't become a writer there was always some problems in my life. Small problems in my life were always a troublesome couldn't get things done which I was wished for
  

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My father has struggled his whole life to get us a higher education. He is a hardworking man, and has always made sacrifices for his children for their better life and better future. This is a small, beautiful family we have.

— Mister Micawber

  • My father has struggled his whole life to get us a higher education.
  • He is a hardworking man, and has always made sacrifices for his children for their better life and better future.
  • This is a small, beautiful family we have.
  • I always had a dream of becoming a successful female writer, but unfortunately I couldn't, because there have always been problems.
  • The many small problems in my life were always troublesome, so I couldn't do what I had hoped to do.
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My father has struggled his whole life to get us a higher education. He is a hardworking man, and has always made sacrifices for his children for their better life and better future. This is a small, beautiful family we have.

I always had a dream of becoming a successful female writer, but unfortunately I couldn't, because there have always been problems. The many small problem
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