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Dilshi Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Someone please correct my sentence

I'm Mindy from Sri Lanka. I write this mail because still I didn't get a response after the online interview. Kindly I would like to know whether I was selected or not.

  

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I have not yet received any communication following my online interview. Please could you advise whether I am still under consideration for the position? Many thanks, (name) Just to add - it would be better not to start a formal email like this with 'Hi', although it's commonly used to start emails with friends and colleagues you know well.

  • I have not yet received any communication following my online interview.
  • Please could you advise whether I am still under consideration for the position?
  • Many thanks, (name) Just to add - it would be better not to start a formal email like this with 'Hi', although it's commonly used to start emails with friends and colleagues you know well.
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I have not yet received any communication following my online interview. Please could you advise whether I am still under consideration for the position?

Many thanks,

(name)


Just to add - it would be better not to start a formal email like this with 'Hi', although it's commonly used to start emails with friends and colleagues you know well.

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