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Dilshi Posted 9 years ago
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Someone please correct my sentence

Though the whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, but our love is overflowing during the whole year like a waterfall falls in 24*7.

  

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You have two options: Though the whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, our love is overflowing 24/7 during the whole year like a waterfall. The whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, but our love is overflowing 24/7 during the whole year like a waterfall.

  • You have two options: Though the whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, our love is overflowing 24/7 during the whole year like a waterfall.
  • The whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, but our love is overflowing 24/7 during the whole year like a waterfall.
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You have two options:

Though the whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, our love is overflowing 24/7 during the whole year like a waterfall.

The whole world has appointed a special day for lovers, but our love is overflowing 24/7 during the whole year like a waterfall.

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