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Dilshi Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Someone please correct my sentence

How on earth you say this is just a slightly presentable one (picture), this seems like Cinderella is happily wondering when she saw the prince that he was searching for the true owner of the shoe.
  

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Some of it is hard to understand. — How on earth can you say that this is just a slightly presentable one (picture)? This seems like Cinderella is happily wondering when she sees the Prince whether he is searching for the owner of the slipper.

  • Some of it is hard to understand.
  • — How on earth can you say that this is just a slightly presentable one (picture)?
  • This seems like Cinderella is happily wondering when she sees the Prince whether he is searching for the owner of the slipper.
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Some of it is hard to understand. Is it this?—

How on earth can you say that this is just a slightly presentable one (picture)? This seems like Cinderella is happily wondering when she sees the Prince whether he is searching for the owner of the slipper.
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Thank you.
Why it is the word "whether" after prince? Can't we use "that " or some other word?
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dilshiWhy it is the word "whether" after prince?
Because Cinderella is wondering.
dilshiCan't we use "that " or some other word?
You could use 'if', but why do you not like 'whether'?
As I said, your original is a little difficult to interpret; if it means something other than what I wrote as a revision, then you will ha
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Thank you so much. Emotion: smile

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