0 Can someone please chek out my essay? I'm still struggling with my English 02br 02br 00 “The Motorcycle Diaries”, directed by Walter Salles, is a movie based in a true-life story that marked the future of revolutionary Ernesto “Che” Guevara de la Serna and his friend Alberto Granado. During the 1950’s, Ernesto Guevara and Alberto Granado traveled throughout South America on a motorcycle. It is a story of a journey throughout South America—from Argentina to Venezuela—by motorcycle. During the journey of self-discovery, Ernesto and Alberto endured many hardships like many Latinos in The United States. Alberto and Ernesto gained a face-to-face experience with poverty, and exploitation that led them on a journey of self-discovery. 02br 02br 00 Alberto and Ernesto experienced differences between social classes in their journey across South America. In many Latin American countries, social class differences among their residents are expressed in many ways that make them always visible. But the main differences between these classes are lifestyle, customs, and working conditions. In “The Motorcycle Diaries”, Ernesto and Alberto discovered that poverty is some of the day-to-day issues affecting low class people—indigenous, farmworkers, and mineworkers all over Latin America. In contrast, they found out that wealthy few people—capitalists—have a better quality of life. It is a clear example between the upper class lifestyle of Chichina's family and the indigenous people in Peru. Ernesto and Alberto stayed for three weeks at San Pablo, a leper colony in Peru, where hierarchy is based on health and position. In this leper colony, the river plays an important role separating treated patients—sick people—from doctors and nurses —healthy people. However, their desperate need for survival and feed their families force low class people to work under exploitation. 02br 02br 00 In addition to gaining a face-to-face experience with social classes, Ernesto and Alberto faced forms of exploitation affecting people at every place they stop. Ernesto and Alberto encounter desperate indigenous people being displaced from their own land by capitalists. They visited Chuquicamata copper mine in Chile. It was run by U.S. mining company and viewed by Ernesto as a symbol of exploitation. In addition, Ernesto and Alberto discovered the way companies make a lot of money from poor people. In the same way, “The Plum Plum Pickers”, written by Jorge Soto, emphasizes the way the gringo—the oppressor—exploited farm workers who labored in the fields. They have no rights. Moreover, farmworkers do not claim justice because they are afraid that they will be fired for exercising their rights. Similarly, in “The Organizer Tale”, Cesar Chavez addresses the experience of “how people working the roses are sick and tired of being treated and he was willing to ‘go the limit’”(294). However, exploited people are organized so that they can help each other. In addition, they are able to sacrifice themselves for their families. 02br 02br 00 Along with their experience of exploitation affecting people at every place they stop, Ernesto and Alberto experienced a journey of self-discovery. According to Kenneth Turan, L.A times writer, “like riders everywhere, Guevara and his friend Alberto Granado were changed by their bike experience, by the eight months they spent in...South America, but not in the way they expected”(1). The farther they went the more they could understand the continent’s reality. Throughout their journey of self-discovery, Ernesto and Alberto started to change their way of thinking of the world by their new experiences in South America. Their face-to-face experiences and people they encounter, from wealthy few people to exploited mineworkers, from indigenous people in Cuzco to leper patients at San Pablo affected the identities of Ernesto and Alberto. For example, Ernesto leaves his birthday party and takes a night swim across the river to the other side, to his patients in the leper’s colony. 02br 02br 02br 0-
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0 Hi Pilita, 02br 02br 00My own 2 cents: 02br 001. Literary analysis is normally done in present tense (that normally includes the plot summary). You keep going between present and past tense, which is a little confusing.
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0 Hi Pilita, 02br 02br 00My own 2 cents: 02br 001.
Literary analysis is normally done in present tense (that normally includes the plot summary).
You keep going between present and past tense, which is a little confusing.
02br 002.
You've repeated quite a few phrases here and there, and the repetition makes your essay wordy.
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0 Hi Pilita, 02br 02br 00My own 2 cents: 02br 001. Literary analysis is normally done in present tense (that normally includes the plot summary). You keep going between present and past tense, which is a little confusing. 02br 002. You've repeated quite a few phrases here and there, and the repetition makes your essay wordy. If you must repeat a them