Someone could help me with my motivation letter, thank you in advance:)

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00I'm fresh here. This is my first time to post here. 02br
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00I need help about my motivation letter. I just finished it, but I think it's better to have someone else correct my syntax and grammar since English is not my native language.02br
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00Thanx very much guys!!!02br
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00Below you can find the letter:02br
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00Dear Mr.< ...>,02br
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00As an undergraduate industrial engineer in electronics, I am going to continue further education in engineering after finishing my programme in 00. When I was in Beijing Jiaotong university in 00, taking my first bachelor year programme in electronics, I had already learned of <.....>(name of university). After finishing the first year in 0100China0200, I went to 00 00 00 in 010200 to continue the rest three years as an exchange student, major in electronic engineering. I think <...> is a perfect place for engineers to study further in their own fields, especially in electrical engineering and information and communication technology in my own perspective. 02br
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00Being a diligent and creative engineer with wide range of knowledge in electronics, I am able to either work on my own or be a good team member in a group. Based on all the key areas of knowledge and skills I have learned and also extensive engineering projects I have done in 00, I think they would help me a lot to follow the programme, system-on-chip design. In addition, I am doing my final thesis in Agilent Technologies Belgium, which is a multinational measurement company with advancing electronics as the main business. Through this particular thesis, I have learned a lot of HDL programming and circuit design based on FPGA. All the aspects above make me feel being qualified for the programme I apply for.02br
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00Being accepted for this programme, there would be many opportunities of either finding employment in a great variety of industries or continuing further research career. 02br
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00After you have reviewed my enclosed resume, I would appreciate it very much if you could consider me as a good candidate for the programme. I can be reached by phone at any time after 2 p.m. daily at <....>.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00<......>0-