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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics
someone-can-correct-my-song-written-in-english please ;)
I'm a french people and the English language is the best to write a song, i written a song but I m very bad in Englsih. So Does someone can correct my song written in English please? Thank you ! Excuse me if my English is not good and if I post in the wrong place
Before November 6, we were still together. You were my friend just for one year. Everyone thought we were dating And I never knew what you were thinking.
During the new school year, you met my buddy. And I was afraid that you leave me. Surely by jealousy, I could not lose you After more than a year I fell in love with you
During the holidays, I felt ready I asked you to go out with me And one fine day, you came to me After a long talk, you kissed me quickly
But a few days later, on the phone, you told me That you regretted, that you were sorry Since November 6, I miss you terribly
I pretend that I am okay Because it's painful, even today You were my love just for one day
Excuse me Merry, but I can’t bear to be your buddy Your life will be better without me It’s not against you I want to be away from you Because I still love you
Merry, I'm so addicted to you but I know that for you, the November 6 has never existed
Before November 6, we were still together. You were my friend just for one year. Everyone thought we were dating And I never knew what you were thinking.
During the new school year, you met my buddy. And I was afraid that you leave me. Surely by jealousy, I could not lose you After more than a year I fell in love with you
During the holidays, I felt ready I asked you to go out with me And one fine day, you came to me After a long talk, you kissed me quickly
But a few days later, on the phone, you told me That you regretted, that you were sorry Since November 6, I miss you terribly
I pretend that I am okay Because it's painful, even today You were my love just for one day
Excuse me Merry, but I can’t bear to be your buddy Your life will be better without me It’s not against you I want to be away from you Because I still love you
Merry, I'm so addicted to you but I know that for you, the November 6 has never existed
Top answer
It's the form of a narrative love story, not a song. Look at some examples of lyrics (words to songs). There are many web sites for lyrics.
- It's the form of a narrative love story, not a song.
- Look at some examples of lyrics (words to songs).
- There are many web sites for lyrics.
- Before November 6, we were still together.
- You were my friend just for one year.
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It's the form of a narrative love story, not a song.
Look at some examples of lyrics (words to songs). There are many web sites for lyrics.
Before November 6, we were still together. You were my friend just for one year. Everyone thought we were dating. And I never knew what you were thinking.
During the new school year, you met my buddy. And I was afraid that you
Look at some examples of lyrics (words to songs). There are many web sites for lyrics.
Before November 6, we were still together. You were my friend just for one year. Everyone thought we were dating. And I never knew what you were thinking.
During the new school year, you met my buddy. And I was afraid that you
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Hello,
Thanks you very much for your help. But for "It's the form of a narrative love story, not a song.
Look at some examples of lyrics (words to songs). There are many web sites for lyrics.", I dont understood but it is not serious. Thanks you again
Thanks you very much for your help. But for "It's the form of a narrative love story, not a song.
Look at some examples of lyrics (words to songs). There are many web sites for lyrics.", I dont understood but it is not serious. Thanks you again
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