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Someone can check for me pary of my project?
Hi,
I wrote introduction :
After a lot of thinking I decided to do my English project about a drug called "Heroin".This drug is very addictive and people who just try it once can be addicted to it for a very long time .
I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I wanted to know the consequences of using this drug and the research question: "How does heroin affect our lives and what harm can it cause?".
I hope that i'll acquire more knowledge about this drug and find answers to my non –answered questions.
Finally, i hope i'll enjoy the process of working on this project and i 'll be given some more information .
----------- someone can check for me the spelling and structure of sentence?
Thanks
I wrote introduction :
After a lot of thinking I decided to do my English project about a drug called "Heroin".This drug is very addictive and people who just try it once can be addicted to it for a very long time .
I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I wanted to know the consequences of using this drug and the research question: "How does heroin affect our lives and what harm can it cause?".
I hope that i'll acquire more knowledge about this drug and find answers to my non –answered questions.
Finally, i hope i'll enjoy the process of working on this project and i 'll be given some more information .
----------- someone can check for me the spelling and structure of sentence?
Thanks
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Here are some of my comments and suggested changes (underlined). This drug is very addictive and people who have just tried it once can be addicted to it for a very long time . I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I wanted to know the consequences of using this drug and the research question: " How does heroin affect our lives and what harm can it cause?
- Here are some of my comments and suggested changes (underlined).
- This drug is very addictive and people who have just tried it once can be addicted to it for a very long time .
- I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I wanted to know the consequences of using this drug and the research question: " How does heroin affect our lives and what harm can it cause?
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- (This paragraph is awkward) I hope that i'll acquire more knowledge about this drug and find answers to my un answered questions.
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Here are some of my comments and suggested changes (underlined).
I wrote this introduction :
After a lot of thought, I decided to do my English project about a drug called "Heroin".This drug is very addictive and people who have just tried it once can be addicted to it for a very long time .
I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I w
I wrote this introduction :
After a lot of thought, I decided to do my English project about a drug called "Heroin".This drug is very addictive and people who have just tried it once can be addicted to it for a very long time .
I chose to do my project on this specific drug because I w
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