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Nessitas Posted 18 years ago
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0My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I wake up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruits, vegetables and some more food.02br
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00When I come back I must to cook, to washe de dishies and clear the home.02br
00After have lunch, actually I take care myself, hair, body and face. Also I like to sleep for a wile.02br
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00On the afternoon I cook some delicius food for to recieve my friends. All the Saturday they come to my home to study the God´s words, to talk and to be together.02br
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00At nigth we go to the church . There is wonderful because we sing, dance and to read the bible, always have a big christian party.02br
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00After that we go out for some reataurants, and there have more foods, laughs and happinies.0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00My weekend is very busy. 02br 00After I have lunch, I really take care of myself, my hair, my body and my face. 02br 02br 00In the afternoon, I cook some delicious food for my friends.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00My weekend is very busy.
  • 02br 00After I have lunch, I really take care of myself, my hair, my body and my face.
  • 02br 02br 00In the afternoon, I cook some delicious food for my friends.
  • 02br 02br 00In the evening, we go to church .
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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00My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I wake up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruit, vegetables and some other food.02br
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00When I come back I must cook, wash dishes and clean my home.02br
00After I have lunch, I really take care of myself, my hair, my body and my face. Also, I like to sleep for a whil
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0 My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I 01b00get02b00 01del00wake02del00 up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruit01del00s02del00, vegetables and some more food. 01b00"some more food" is awkward perhaps you should just say "buy groceries" that includes the fruit, etc.02br
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0RayH and Clive 02br
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00Thank you very much!02img0-

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