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B.J Posted 16 years ago
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A place I want to visit on my weekend is the local bookstore.

It take me only five munites walk from my house and it's not big store but it's very convenient.

The main reason I like to go there is actually they sell many books of my favorite publisher. My favorite publisher's books are not selled a lot in other bookstore.

And the second reason is I can browse manga. Many other store can't do it. Usually manga are wrapped. That's very important to me.

The last reason is there is a very good cafe next the bookstore. So I buy book sometimes and read it in the care. I feel very happy for reading and drinking.

Thanks in advance!
  

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I'd suggest the following, A place I want to visit on my the weekend is the local bookstore. It take me is only a five munites minute walk from my house , and it's not big store but it's very convenient. The main reason I like to go there is actually because they sell many books of from my favorite publisher.

  • I'd suggest the following, A place I want to visit on my the weekend is the local bookstore.
  • It take me is only a five munites minute walk from my house , and it's not big store but it's very convenient.
  • The main reason I like to go there is actually because they sell many books of from my favorite publisher.
  • My favorite publisher's books are not selled sold in a lot in other bookstore s .
  • And the second reason is I can to visit the bookstore is to browse manga.
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I'd suggest the following,

A place I want to visit on my the weekend is the local bookstore.
It take me is only a five munites

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