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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing

somebody can correct my cover letter?

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my aspiration for participating at Global Entrepreneurship Summer School 2013.
My name is ****** and I am undergraduate student at ***** university at the faculty of Education. Last year, because of the economic crisis and the high unemployment at young people, I started to be much more interested in Entrepreneurship issues, so as i can dream a better future for me and my country. For this reason, the last months i participated at many entrepreneurship events and seminars and i managed to acquire an elementary knowledge about Startup businesses and generally Social Entrepreneurship. Indeed, I managed to ensure a place for a short-term voluntary internship at the Marketing department of a company through AIESEC.
My main goal after graduation this autumn is to be much more associated with entrepreneurship, by starting a Startup company or by continuing my studies with a Master degree. My will is to continue in a Master at the field of Management at good university somewhere in Europe or America.
For all these reasons, i am keen on participating at your Summer School, as i believe that this summer school will help me broaden my horizons and will provide me some important experience to succeed my future goals. Also, this year's topic of your summer school is "Rethinking Education" and that fits me absolutely because of my studies.
I am highly motivated to study and enthusiastic about learning new things. I work well as a team member, I am very reliable and organized and all these can be proven by the excellent cooperation with the other team members at Thessaloniki Startup Weekend. Furthermore, I look forward to the networking opportunities, generated by the national diversity of people attending this summer school. I would be happy to work together with students from all over the world. I know that maybe I lack of the appropriate technical background for the entrepreneurship, but I have a strong will to learn new things.
I would like to thank you for considering my application and I look forwrd to receive your answer.
Yours sincerely,
  

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my desire to participate in the Global Entrepreneurship Summer School 2013. My name is ****** and I am undergraduate student at ***** university in the faculty of Education. Last year, because of the economic crisis and the high unemployment of young people, I started to be much more interested in entrepreneurship issues, so I can dream of a better future for me and my country.

  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my desire to participate in the Global Entrepreneurship Summer School 2013.
  • My name is ****** and I am undergraduate student at ***** university in the faculty of Education.
  • Last year, because of the economic crisis and the high unemployment of young people, I started to be much more interested in entrepreneurship issues, so I can dream of a better future for me and my country.
  • For this reason, in the last few months, I have participated in many entrepreneurship events and seminars and I managed to acquire an elementary knowledge about startup businesses and social entrepreneurship in general.
  • Indeed, I managed to ensure a place in a short-term voluntary internship at the Marketing department of a company through AIESEC.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my desire to participate in the Global Entrepreneurship Summer School 2013. My name is ****** and I am undergraduate student at ***** university in the faculty of Education.
Last year, because of the economic crisis and the high unemployment of young people, I started to be much more interested in entrepreneurship issues, so I can

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