For high school students, determining their future career is extremely important. Therefore, many students, after graduating from high school, decide to choose a gap year as a method to discover themselves. In my opinion, the benefits of having a gap year outweigh its drawbacks.
When students delay tertiary education, several problems can be anticipated. The primary reason is that these students can lose momentum and academic knowledge easily. For instance, if they are too focus on experiencing new things, they tend to lose their interest in returning to university after a long year without studying any academic knowledge. Another significant point endorsing this view is that a gap- year student may have to face the pressure that they cannot imagine from many aspects of social life. As a matter of fact, they will deal with many new problems such as money management, social relationships or independent living which will put a strain on students that just graduate from high school.
In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that spending a year to know more about yourself is a positive measure. The key proof of this is that the person is able to broaden his/her horizon which relates to social skills such as communication , behavior, and to mention but a few through social activities like volunteering. In addition, they will improve their money management and use them more appropriately because the money they use is the money they earn themselves. The reality has indicated that people who understand how to earn money will use it more suitable. Finally, gap year students are capable of having more independent and disciplinary life in the future. If they do not take year off but choose a major wihout thinking, may be this kind of jobs unsuitable , you will be not only disappointed but also it will take more time to find your habit.
In a nutshell, it seems to me that the advantages of having a gap year are more considerable than its disadvantages and this method of learning is certain an extremely good recomendation for high school students, especially who want to understand themselves clearly and have more social experiences.
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For high school students, determining their future career is extremely important. Therefore, many students, after graduating from high school, decide to choose a gap year as a method to discover themselves. In my opinion, the benefits of having a gap year outweigh its drawbacks.
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