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Jack.Dalton Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Some sentences
Hello!
Please help me with thses sentences:
Please help me with thses sentences:
- Homosexuality can be defined as a sexual attraction to persons of one's own sex. (is “persons” correct?)
- On the one hand, a lot of people formally condemn prostitution but on the other, they accept such a form of earning money... (is “on the other” correct, I mean shouldn’t it be: “on the other hand”?)
- (it's about men who don't wat to get married)They never get emotionally involved and enjoy being as free as the birds. (is “as free as the birds” correct? I mean I know a singular form “as free as a bird” but can it be used in plural like this?)
- Some 'con men' offer crossword puzzles the profits from which go to support a worthy cause or organisation. (is it correct?)
- Since demand creates supply, a huge criminal hierarchy formed then around supplying prohibited booze (is this sentence correct? (word order etc.))
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Hi, Homosexuality can be defined as a sexual attraction to persons of one's own ***. ) Yes. The word persons' is quite common in quais-oicial definitions, regulations.
- Hi, Homosexuality can be defined as a sexual attraction to persons of one's own ***.
- ) Yes.
- The word persons' is quite common in quais-oicial definitions, regulations.
- etc.
- On the one hand, a lot of people formally condemn prostitution but on the other, they accept such a form of earning money...
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Hi,
- Homosexuality can be defined as a sexual attraction to persons of one's own ***. (is “persons” correct?) Yes. The word persons' is quite common in quais-oicial definitions, regulations. etc.
- On the one hand, a lot of people formally condemn prostitution but on the other, they accept such a form of earning money... (is “on
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