I was reading an article by the JoongAng Ilbo, an English version, and have two sentences which I want to ask you about. <br/><br/><i>1. Moon Jae-in, the civil affairs senior secretary, tried to justify the omissions as protection of privacy.</i><br/><br/> Here can it be better if written like this?<br/><br/>Moon Jae-in, the civil affairs senior secretary, tried to justify the omissions as that relates to the principle of protection of privacy.<br/><br/><i>2. ... was forced to admit to journalists, ..., that <u>"all the explanations until now are inoperative."</u></i><br/><br/>Here, can you use quotation marks to quote something that doesn't normally look like you are quoting but stating your opinion and not someone else's.