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Mickeymouse1525 Posted 9 years ago
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Some people think the main purpose of education is to make individuals useful to society; others say education helps them to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose that education serves. However, whether they should mainly make individual beneficial to society or help them to gain personal ambitions has cause heated debate. As regard for this case, I will I will scrutinise both views along with related examples.

First, it is clear that for most people the ultimate aim of receiving is to contribute as well as to implement the knowledge and skills for the prosperity of society. In other words, People tend to focus on developing their social awareness through education in order to bring the society become a better community. For example, people have the expertise in medicine science probably make out the new vaccine which help all of us prevent the diseases, especially, types of cancer diseases.

On the other hand, others believe that in the modern life, attending to the education institutions for having skills as well as experience is as the tools to enter job market easily. For this reaseon, they will make an effort to be master in many fields as much as possible. For instance, these days, students are tending to obtain higher education for becoming qualified employees in the competive job market so that thay can earn their living, raise their own families and achieve live value.

My view is that both purposes of entering education institution mentioned above might be in line together. They can be valuable persons for the society when they have a job which we allocate some money from our salaries to educate people by providing the fund for those children who need it for school fee.

By way of conclusion, everyone has their own targets to entering education, but the most significant thing is how to save themselves by having a permanent job while contributing their skills for the prosperity of society.

  

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Could anyone check and correct my essay, please?

This is the first time I've posted my essay here, So I haven't known the rule.

If I take any mistakes, please ignore it.

Thanks so much

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