Becoming wealthy in the modern world is considered to be a challenging thing to achieve. Therefore, many believe that rich individuals have the chance to improve the lives of others. This viewpoint, in my opinion, is not entirely true because you don't have to be rich to be able to change someone's life for the better.
Being rich will give you the money and the ability to do things that an average person cannot do. For instance, a tycoon can easily support the education and living conditions of an orphan when adopting them without having to worry too much about the financial problems that can occur in the future. This is the reason why orphanages demand the detail about the financial stability of the foster parents before allowing them to take care of a child.
However, this does not mean that a normal person can only alternate the future of an individual when they are rich. Although not a lot of great things can be done or achieved, efforts can still be made to brighten other's lives. In fact, the act of kindness, sometimes, does not require money or an abundance of resources. For example, a conversation or an act of appreciation can help to lighten the mood of the opposite person and improve their mental state. This, sometimes, can motivate an exhausted individual or prevent a potential crime from happening.
In conclusion, a person does not have to be wealthy to have the capability to change someone's life. That being said, money still remains an important factor as it can open more doors for someone to do more things for others.
(Personally, I think that I misunderstand the question. However, I still want to give this a try to see will my answer be accepted or not).
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Le Minh Quang(Personally, I think that I misunderstand the question
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A few people work very hard, take risks, and are fortunate enough to become very rich. Others inherit fortunes from their parents. Some pe
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