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Trúc Ngọc Posted 8 years ago
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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the best solution to reduce the traffic accidents is to raise the age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. I completely agree with this view.

Firstly, mature people can ride motorbikes or drive cars in a more responsible way because they are aware of safety. For example, adults want to show off while driving, but young people’s tendency to drive fast.

Secondly, adults always interest to everyone’s, because they always worry about the problems when they made accidents. For example, if people have a collision in the road, these people have to pay money for car repairs.

Moreover, young people are an impatient because they hate waiting for signal lights. For example, young person often to get over the intersection while they must to wait the signal lights in the streets.

Finally, young people often drink alcohol with their friends, but mature adults often interest to their health, because normally, they do not drink beer before driving. For example, after people drunk some alcohol, they had disallowed for drive cars or ride motorbikes. However, young people do not care about this issues. Furthermore, young people always drive fast when they come back home too late, and it is causing the serious accidents, it can bring serious casualty for these people. For example, in an accident, young people can die or loss of consciousness.

Nowadays, these was an increase in the traffic accidents changes over time. For example, the figure of young people death is increasing rapidly compare with mature person in 2016.

In conclusion, I totally agree that the best solution for this issue is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes.

  

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As I said before: please do NOT put the essay question in the "Subject" line. Put the essay question and instructions in the message body with your essay.
I already commented on an essay you wrote on this topic in the following thread.

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