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Tran Vo Duy Anh Posted 7 years ago
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Some people think that it is a moral obligation for developed countries to provide international aid to developing countries, while others worry that the aid might possibly be misused by the governments of the poor countries and can not actually...

Nowadays, a wealth of countries are becoming increasingly realize the potential benefits from the countries relationship. In some cases, these nations would support themsves by financing the government with many huge investments project. But is it used in the right way? In my view, it will be somewhat effective.


If the authority of the poor countries pay attention to increasing education budget and upgrade the new technologies, they would let their poor citizens to have a better life. This is because while the poor nations need most is not money, but technologies and real talents in key areas. By which, it is worth in the long run that we would thriving on the driving force trained to become expertises in many area, leading to get their countries move forward.


While many countries use money subsidized by developed countries effectively to bridge the gap between rich and poor countries, we could face an enormous number of countries still not get rid of the poverty. For example, instead of investing the most fundamental area as education or technology, there are many countries focusing on develop to deal with the immediate concern without solving the root of causes like the calibre of people. This is because most poverty stem from the poor education.

Therefore, depending upon the particular policy that the rich countries will help the poor countries by many different ways to the developing get rich. Instead of pouring money into the poor countries, we are likely to provide the specific and practical project about education, health care which in turn avoiding the case that “it will be a waste of money due to the shortcoming of these governments”


To conclude, international aid have been appreciated to make a closer relationship between the developed and the developing countries. Each countries all certainly have any advantage to be prior the others that in the long term, this supporting might be also beneficial to the developed countries. Such as a large number of workers with low prices, the potential market with the lack of exploiting that the rich nations could take strain to thrive their economy.

  

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