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Thảo Dương Nguyên Posted 8 years ago
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Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our achievements. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are understood to be tremendous debates as regards human race in the contemporary society who are possessing the numerous quantity of knowledge rather those in ancient cultures. Nevertheless, others believe that this above perspective underrated intensively the antique cultural accomplishment and simultaneously, emphasises our attainment nowadays. The analysis of the progress of discernment in human and the outstanding innovation in life qualify will be conducted to elucidate the aforementioned thesis.


Admittedly, the importance in the developing process of human civilisation is indisputable. In particular, in the initial period without gas, people managed to make fire from the collision of two stones. Moreover, even in ancient phase or in present society, people all have the possibility as to perception to understand and deal with their world. Therefore, whatsoever is available today which is actually a progressive evolution of what was showed in the past.


It is undeniable that state-of-the-art technology nowadays make humankind’s life more straightforward. For instance, robots are devised for supporting people in almost fields such as medical treatment or doing chores. Aside from that, these achievements from our ancestor are kept update by intelligent generations and created advanced yields for the sake of time-saving which minimize manual labor. Correspondingly, these developments make people believe that the current generation is more talented and superior to people in the past.


In conclusion, indubitably, earlier developments play a vital role as a stepping stone for current generation. Although existing in the peak period of hi-tech, the establishment is still based on the multifarious number of inventions and discoveries of yore.

  

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There are understood to be tremendous debates (Really? I have never heard any such debates. In Task 2, do not exaggerate. Give straightforward, factual statements that you know to be true from your own experience or research.) as regards human race in the contemporary society who are possessing the numerous quantity of knowledge rather thos

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