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Blue papaya 838 Posted 4 years ago
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Following to the desirable subject is thought to be necessary for students, whereas others argue that they should be forced into certain key subjects areas. From my personal point of view, I agree with the point that pupils at university need to choose the major that they are passionate about.

On the one hand, there are various reasons why some people contend that it would be better for students to study intellectual subjects. They may assert that university courses like medicine, engineering, economics, computer science and so forth. It is undeniable that these majors could bring plenty of benefits for nations, as well as for pupils’ careers. Particularly, these courses provide employment prospects and well-paid jobs that result in the peace of mind of students about their future. For example, with the development of cutting-edge technology, the IT sector considers having high remuneration and opportunity. In addition, by forcing people to choose a particular job, governments can ensure the economic knowledge and skill gaps are covered.

On the other hand, I debate that a very important part is encouraged students to pursue their passion. The first reason is that not everyone is had academically inclined. For instance, if impelling them to get into a subject demanding plenty of academic projects and research, it will make them fell demotivated and ineffective. As a consequence, it somehow affects their mental health, such as learning phobias, depression, anxiety and so on. Secondly, in case students are not really successful or get failures in their dreaming jobs, they will not regret as it is a sentimental value when they put their all efforts, youth and enthusiasm to find out what is meaningful.

To conclude, although some people argue that it is essential to force student studying in a useful course in order to gain a bigger opportunity in the future, I personally believe that they should make their own decision to overcome any obstacles.

  

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Following to the desirable subject is thought to be necessary for students, (That is very poor English. It makes no sense. You need to write about the task, that is, competition between students. ) whereas others argue that they should be forced into certain key subjects areas. (That is off

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