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Some people think it is better to shop online, while others prefer to go to a store to shop. Discuss both side and give your opinion

In the process of consolidation and development which is required people in the society have to follow the modern trends such as: fashion, sport and entertainment, fashion is the necessary demand and never be enough for people.

As we know, nowadays, from the office clothes to the pyjamas have their brandnames. Besides, there was a rapid growth in shopping demands of people. They always want to buy many new clothes in order to replace clothes that are oldfashion and do not fit the trends in the present. That’s the reason why shopping online in the internet and shopping offline in the fashion shops develops fast and becomes one of the best modern industry which can make a huge of money.

Firstly, with the strong development of the internet as well as the birth of the social network application and modern mobile devices, the shopping online has many advantages such as:

  • Saving the time and cost of moving for customers. They can search and choose many different samples of clothes at home.
  • Price showed online in the website, so that they can easily compare and buy the best ones they like.
  • Clothes have the variety of stype and orgin ( come from many countries )
  • Flexible time to order and deliver.
  • It’s cheaper price than offline shop ( free ship sometimes )

However, shopping online has some disadvantages that we must consider, such as:

  • The quality of products.
  • It’s hard to exchange or guarantee the products when it has problems.
  • The bad customer services.

Secondly, shopping offline in the stores is increasing quickly :

  • The customers can have lots of chances and time for experience reality.
  • They can check the quality, price and customer survices in real.
  • Take the detail advices from the sellers in real.
  • It’s to exchange the products.

Nevertheless, it still has some difficulties :

  • Wasting time to move to the shops.
  • It is a tight squeeze when the shops have promotion programs.
  • It’s more expensive to buy offline than online
  • It’s hard to compare the price because of the variety of stores and products.
  • Limited time and payment methods.

Every method has pros and cons of its. It depends on condition of everybody, they have their choice. And when shopping online, you should buy on the reputable websites where have clear brandname, information and trust evalution. On the other hand, you should searrch and visit the offline shops that many people know for preventing to be cheated at price or products.

  

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