Some people say that devoting one’s time to family activities is more important than spending time working. Others believe that dedicating one’s time to work is more important.

It is a common belief that people should spend more time on working. However, there is a more persuasive argument that time for the family is more important because doing so can build a bond between members of the family.

On the one hand, spending the amount of time on working can make sustainable finance of family. When people work hard, they can earn more money, or even has an opportunity to a higher position with a better salary. Therefore, raising the family becomes easier. According to a survey, families are usually happier when they have a stable income. They can bring children up better when they have good conditions and facilities. Thus, employers tend to spend most of their time working instead of devoting time to do other things.

Nevertheless, family activities should be devoted more to connect with family members. When parents play with kids, they not only contribute to emotional attachment with children but also release stress and have more happiness. Take a going picnic, which is an interesting and funny activity, as an example. In this activity, all members of the family will have a lot of valuable memories by doing many things such as cooking together, taking family pictures with a beautiful view, and so on. Moreover, this activity is also a great way to relieve tension after a busy week.

To sum up, while it is apparent that spending time working is one way to upgrade the quality of life, it is undeniable that having family activities is more important.

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