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Muxlisa Posted 4 years ago
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, advertisement has been playing an important role in marketing. Regarding this, some people believe that advertising is the most effective way of influencing people to purchase products by trying every neat trick to grab consumer’s attention, while others feel that advertising cannot encourage them to buy advertised products since using con tricks by some of the marketmakers. Personally, I consider that the notion of commercializing products through media and other billboards are still too prevalent to catch public attention.
Advertisements are mainly used to gain in popularity a certain brand of product. These commercials tend to leave a strong impact on consumers due to their entertaining effect. This is because, marketing companies use such extraordinary strategical ways to promote their products by using some impressive tricks to hold people’s attention. When one Nike Shoe Company paid millions of dollars to the famous football player once to tie his Nike shoe knot when starting the football match. Then shoe company gained massive sales revenue as the popularity of this advertising. Thus, companies recruit creative a marketing manager to increase market-driven products.Exponentially flourishing advertisement industry now can be seen on TV, radio, banners, billboards, magazines or even widespread through social media networks. It makes not to being paid attention towards adverts. Some of these commercials, whether on TV or in publications are too repetitive and soon it may brainwash people to finally go out advertised products. As skincare products may have a good advertisement, but it might also be harmful to some some people’s skin. Therefore ,fewer people pay attention to them any more.In conclusion, we are becoming more and more aware of how advertisement actually have Influence on peope when buying items. This industry is broadening its such strategies to increase consumerism and will continue to achieve this goal.
  

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Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line. Put it with your answer in the message body. Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.

  • Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
  • Put it with your answer in the message body.
  • Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.
  • Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
  • Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
Put it with your answer in the message body.

Subject: Please review my IELTS essay

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and g

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You need to restructure this essay into paragraphs.

A simple structure is this.

a 1-one-paragraph introducion

one paragraph for each of you main points

a 1-one-paragraph conclusion.

Clive

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muxlisaIn recent years,

Companies have been advertising for far more than a century. You do not need this adverbial phrase.

There is really no difference between marketing and advertising. They are the same activity. You need a more relevant opening sentence.


In recent years, advertisement has been playing an important role in marke

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