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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and g
You need to restructure this essay into paragraphs.
A simple structure is this.
a 1-one-paragraph introducion
one paragraph for each of you main points
a 1-one-paragraph conclusion.
Clive
muxlisaIn recent years,
Companies have been advertising for far more than a century. You do not need this adverbial phrase.
There is really no difference between marketing and advertising. They are the same activity. You need a more relevant opening sentence.
In recent years, advertisement has been playing an important role in marke