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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, there are variety types of advertisements like tv channels, youtube,banner. While it is claimed that advertising makes us pay for products that is not necessary for our demands, there are stronger evidences why it helps us explore more useful merchandises.

There is a common belief that citizens are made to pay for unnecessary production because of daily advertisements. People are usually fascinated by the outside of products known as packaging. As today companies are concentrating on it to make the merchandise more unique so that it can easily get the heart of the customers and gain sales for the companies even though it is not in the need-list of customers. Moreover, advertising usually provides attractive offers for each product, because of which makes the purchasers can not stop wasting money on things they do not need. For example, Samsung upgrades the version of every phone and invent new software then run advertisements catching customers' eyes.

However, there are more reasonable grounds that advertising brings a range of benefit to people as it enhances knowledge for customers about new products. This is firstly because personal demands about variety fields like beauty, school stuff, clothes,.. has increased day by day, and because of that, advertisements are borned to suggest many choices adapting people’s needs. Thanks to advertising, purchasers can choose among a mixture of products which bring benefits to them. Another reason is that by advertising, we can discover new products affecting better result on ourselves. For instance, Larochepossay is a cosmetic brand made in France which runs advertising as an introduction to their products which remind people to take care of themselves.

In conclusion, people is made to pay for products that is unesscessary because of advertising, however, there is stronger evidence that it can bring a range of amount to people knowledge about a variety of merchandise as there are a lot of goods in the market at the present. It is recommended that customers should look for the information of products before deciding to purchase for it.

  

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You need to be much more careful in writing. There are many grammatical errors. There are many vocabulary errors. I could not mark every mistake.

You did not complete the task because you never gave your opinion on the subject.

Do you believe advertising is harmful and bad because it makes people buy a lot of stuff that they do not use? OR Do you believe adv

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