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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology has become advance with the passing of days and it has also changed the traditional method of shopping. Earlier, it was considered as a monotonous and tedious work whereas, in present times, most of the people admit it as their favorite leisure activity and therefore love to spent money on clothes, groceries and other kinds of stuff and hobby. I strongly advocate that it has a positive trend however there are some negative effects of it. This essay will discuss both with relevant examples.

At present, there are numerous benefits of shopping. Firstly, plenty of online as well as offline options are available to an individual. As far as an online mode is concerned, people buy all their necessary products while sitting at their convenient place. Moreover, they also get discounts on the price and take benefit of easy return and exchange policy, in case, a particular thing is not like by them. For instance, Amazon is an online platform on which many people love to shop and get benefited from its services offered to its customers. Secondly, there are variety of options available related to the different patterns and designs for an article in offline mode also and many take experience of live shopping. To illustrate, in a survey done on a famous street market, it showed that people enjoy to spent money on quality products and bargain for the same with the vendor.

On the other hand, as compared to past, there were very limited and similar options available for purchasing anything from the markets therefore only few people liked to shop. Furthermore, as there was no competition among the vendors, the prices were fixed in most of the cases and it is regarded as boring work to do due to non-availability of offers and sale discounts on essential things. In addition, in past, open markets were too congested and overcrowded due to small space so people avoid to go for shopping.

To conclude, after discussing and comparing past and present shopping methods, I believe that now shopping is very quick and convenient for many people. However, we should also take care of some fake and unreal online modes of shopping.

  

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Please do not put the essay instructions in the “subject” line. Add it to your post: Topic: Teenagers .... unpaid community work.

  • Please do not put the essay instructions in the “subject” line.
  • Add it to your post: Topic: Teenagers ....
  • unpaid community work.
  • ) Your writing is about shopping, apparently, and the essay instructions are about volunteer work.
  • You will get a very poor mark if your essay is on a completely different subject than what is given in the instructions.
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Please do not put the essay instructions in the “subject” line.

Add it to your post:

Topic: Teenagers .... unpaid community work.

My Essay:

(Put your answer here.)


Your writing is about shopping, apparently, and the essay instructions are about volunteer work. You will get a very poor mark if your essay is on a completely different subject than what is given

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