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Sara tarek Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Some people believe that nowadays we have many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Having many choices is easier those days. Several people think that it’s a good thing to have the ability to choose lots of things in our life in the current time. This essay will discuss the benefit of having many choices.

In the present time, it’s too hard to choose from a wide variety. I shall talk about gastronomy. Indeed every person has a different favorite meal. For instance, if you have a big party that’s impossible to cook one dish which all your visitors would be satisfied or like it. Another example if you went out with your friends each body will choose a different dish. I completely disagree with this opinion as if you go shopping for some foods you have the ability to choose from food types.

Despite the difficulty of choosing from the current options. In my point of view, I think it’s a benefit nowadays. We have the capability to choose from many universities and courses which are suitable for us. For example, people who have work and need to study a master degree they can attend part-time in the university, also they have the option to study online if they don’t have time to attend at the campus. As a consequence, they will save both time and money. Overall the idea of having many options is very useful and comfortable.

In conclusion, this essay discussed both views. In my opinion, I can’t talk about all the choices that we have, but I think it’s good to have more than a choice.

  

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This essay needs quite a bit of work. Do not discuss or mention the essay in the essay. " Additionally, it is redundant to say, "In my opinion," and "I think" in the same sentence.

  • This essay needs quite a bit of work.
  • Do not discuss or mention the essay in the essay.
  • " Additionally, it is redundant to say, "In my opinion," and "I think" in the same sentence.
  • The conclusion should not mention the essay, either.
  • " The paragraph about food is very confusing because it seems that you are writing your opinion at the beginning of it, but at the end, you disagree with the whole idea but you do it on the basis of shopping, rather than eating out, which is the topic of the paragraph.
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This essay needs quite a bit of work. Do not discuss or mention the essay in the essay. You don't need to mention that you are expressing your opinion with "in my opinion" or "I think." Additionally, it is redundant to say, "In my opinion," and "I think" in the same sentence. The conclusion should not mention the essay, either. You have misused the word "body." The paragraph about food is very

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