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Joliedevine202 Posted 6 years ago
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Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often said by some that it is vital for youngsters to go to school as soon as possible. Meanwhile, several people would argue that children should stay at home until they are six or seven years old. From my point of view, I totally agree with the latter opinion.

On the one hand, there are two main reasons why young children should not be brought to school as early as possible. First of all, their faculty of seeing, speaking, concentrating and so on are not developed enough. Accordingly, toddlers could not distinguish positive and negative habits that they easily be misguided at school by peers. Secondly, thesedays , almost institutions are often set up with strict disciplines which is not an effective way to educate youngsters, because they are vulnerable that teaching them strictly according to the rules may put them under pressure.

On the other hand, there are also several reasons why it is suitable for toddlers to go to school at six or seven. The first reason is that at this age, child's cognitive development occurs at full pace that their health are ready to explore everything outside their home, especially at school. Undoubtedly, their brains are developed which allows children to broaden their horizons by engaging in every activities of school's curriculum. Last but not least, the growing of their age enables young children to be initially more responsible with their behaviors.

In conclusion, although a number of parents think that it is essential to let their infants go to school early, I would concur that youngsters should go to educating institutions when they are at least six years old.

  

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It is often said by some that it is vital for youngsters (Youngster is a rather casual word. In the US, it means a child from about 7 to 12 years old.) to go to school as soon as possible. Meanwhile, several pe

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