Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven year old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The age of six or seven years old is considered to be the most suitable time for children to develop both their own mental health and their physical health. Some people suppose that children should be stayed at home and play till this age. I pretty agree with that opinion. However, I also agree with the opinion that young children need to go to school as soon as possible.

According to many people, children who are under seven years old should be allowed to stay at home and play. To a certain extent, this opinion is true. Initially, the children from being born to six or seven years old are very curious, they really like the freedom and encouragement to express their own abilities. If they have the opportunities to live in a good environment, they can be encouraged to explore their surroundings, develop their minds, personalities as well as physical health effectively without having to go to school soon. In addition, the children who stay at home will have much time with their families, so they tend to be warmer and closer to their families. Moreover, because a class has an insignificant number of teachers and a large number of students, a home will be a when a child stays at home with his parents, he is taken care better.

On the other hand, I also think that young children need to go to school as soon as possible. Schools will be a great environment for children to broaden their minds, explore their hobbies, learn new interesting things. It is also where young children can make friends, develop their personalities, as well as their EQ and IQ. Therefore, the sooner young children can be allowed to go to school, the more amount of knowledge they can have. Besides the advantages of going to school early, there are also some disadvantages which affect to children. If they are allowed to go to school early, the times which they spend with their parents will be less and less while some teachers sometimes can not understand their students. It can lead to mental health problems in young children like getting depressed, anxious, and so on.

In conclusion, children should be considered to attend school at a certain age. Children in an early age should be allowed to play and explore everything around them.