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Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and express your own point of views

After exhausted time on school, children need to have a holiday to relax and reduce mental stresses. Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacation. But others believe they should have long vaccation. Today i will talk about both opinion's advantages and give my viewpoint about them.


On the one hand, some school give their students an multiple short vacation. It brings a great number of benefits for students and their families. With it, children can take a breather regularly and they can learn more about outside world. For example, all the kids need sometimes to travel with their families which make them learn more time about outside world, about many others culture, cuisine,.... and many soft skill. Getting multiple short vaccation also help children to be in touch with their studious. In addtion, several short vacation help children to have more and more time to visit their relatives, make lovely memories with their love ones.


On the other hand, giving long vaccation for students have its advantages. When they have long holiday. They can find part-time or full-time jobs that give them tuition, reduce financial burden of their parents. Likewise, on long vacation, student can take part in soft skill courses. For instance dancing, playing musical instructment, cooking. By the way, travelling abroad is the destinations for students on long holiday. Whereas, spending much time to take break. They focus on activities outside without reviewing their lessons in class. Morever, after having a long holiday make chidren feel tired becausr they have to face-tozface with homework. Stop studying a long time make students can't do their excercise quickly and correctly


In summary, i think both multiple shott vacation and long vacation have its advantages. However, after getting long holiday, pupil have many problem to solve with their studious. Since in my viewpoint, i think multiple is better.

  

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