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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
some parts of Motivation letter
Hello ! Please help me to correct this.
Thank you so much sir, madam.
- How should/could your mobility contribute to Innovation / Knowledge transfer and the
sustainable development of your Home country from the
cultural, social and economic perspectives?
The main vital reasons behind studying in classes and sharing various ideas with classmates are to live with different cultures and language outside classrooms. Dissimilar thought, traditions and dialect can be challenging, however, I count them as precious benefits. I am going to learn Polish in which most of people in my hometown does not know and way of life Polish people live. These are crucial experiences that I am going to get only in SAT.
As far as my home country is concerned, to sum up, after coming back from Poland, I would love to adapt my knowledge with my country's democracy starting from local areas, most parts of my hometown. Dreaming local people to understand democracy correctly, I would love to create non-profit camps to teach students and people in rural areas about international democracy and politics, and compare my beloved home country with great politics in Poland and Europe. Other inspiration is to motivate everyone from camps to share their knowledge and experiences to society, therefore, right, liberty, and equality will be understood by many more people; there is going to be less chaos political battles as revolting or military governments, protests and new constitutions. Stable politics will be bringing trust from other countries and the trust leads to more international investments, travelers, and so on; that causes better economy to my hometown. Besides, I imagine to have a Polish and European club gathering people who are interested in Polish/European languages and cultures to meet free of charges. I do love to share all experiences to everyone who are interested and teach Polish languages in which rarely does people here know. I do believe the scholarship can improve and stimulate me to bring multi cultures, steady politics and society, also, greater economics.
Thank you so much sir, madam.
- How should/could your mobility contribute to Innovation / Knowledge transfer and the
sustainable development of your Home country from the
cultural, social and economic perspectives?
The main vital reasons behind studying in classes and sharing various ideas with classmates are to live with different cultures and language outside classrooms. Dissimilar thought, traditions and dialect can be challenging, however, I count them as precious benefits. I am going to learn Polish in which most of people in my hometown does not know and way of life Polish people live. These are crucial experiences that I am going to get only in SAT.
As far as my home country is concerned, to sum up, after coming back from Poland, I would love to adapt my knowledge with my country's democracy starting from local areas, most parts of my hometown. Dreaming local people to understand democracy correctly, I would love to create non-profit camps to teach students and people in rural areas about international democracy and politics, and compare my beloved home country with great politics in Poland and Europe. Other inspiration is to motivate everyone from camps to share their knowledge and experiences to society, therefore, right, liberty, and equality will be understood by many more people; there is going to be less chaos political battles as revolting or military governments, protests and new constitutions. Stable politics will be bringing trust from other countries and the trust leads to more international investments, travelers, and so on; that causes better economy to my hometown. Besides, I imagine to have a Polish and European club gathering people who are interested in Polish/European languages and cultures to meet free of charges. I do love to share all experiences to everyone who are interested and teach Polish languages in which rarely does people here know. I do believe the scholarship can improve and stimulate me to bring multi cultures, steady politics and society, also, greater economics.
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Here are some suggestions. If you revise and post again, it can be improved even more. The main and vital (It's better to use only one of these nearly equivalent adjectives) reasons behind studying in classes and sharing various ideas with classmates are to (be able to/ encourage the student to) live with different cultures and language outside the classroom .
- Here are some suggestions.
- If you revise and post again, it can be improved even more.
- The main and vital (It's better to use only one of these nearly equivalent adjectives) reasons behind studying in classes and sharing various ideas with classmates are to (be able to/ encourage the student to) live with different cultures and language outside the classroom .
- Dissimilar thought s , traditions and dialect s can be challenging ; however, I count them as precious benefits.
- I am going to learn Polish , a language in which most of people in my hometown does not know .
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Here are some suggestions. If you revise and post again, it can be improved even more.
The main and vital (It's better to use only one of these nearly equivalent adjectives) reasons behind studying in classes and sharing various ideas with classmates are to (be able to/ encourage the student to) live with different cultures and language outside the classroom.
The main and vital (It's better to use only one of these nearly equivalent adjectives) reasons behind studying in classes and sharing various ideas with classmates are to (be able to/ encourage the student to) live with different cultures and language outside the classroom.
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