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Ng Kai Lin
32,Jalan Jambu Mawar Satu,
Taman Jambu Mawar ,
14000 Bukit Mertajam,
Penang,
Malaysia

Unit Kemasukan dan Pengambilan
Bahagian Pengurusan Acedemik,
Jabatan Pendaftaran,
University Sains Malaysia,
11800 USM,
Penang,
Malaysia

Dear MR/MS,

Application for Course Changing

My name is Ng Kai Lin, I just get an offer from USM for the course of Sastera (Ilmu Kemanusian) [SA01].I wish to apply for changing my course to Sastera (Bahasa dan Terjemahan) [SB01].Below are my reasons for changing my course.

1.I am a person who enjoy interact with others, so that I think Sastera(Bahasa dan Terjemahan) will offer me a better chance to interact with others compare to my original course.

2.I think that Sastera(Bahasa dan Terjemahan)[SB01] will offer me a better chance to expose to different type of languages compare to my original course.

3.In the future I wish to involve myself into Tourism Industry. I do think that Sastera(Bahasa dan Terjemahan)[SB01] will offer me a better competitive advantage in this field.

I shall be glad if my application can be consider by you.

Your Faithfully