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Puakeng Posted 16 years ago
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Some motivational words to be shared

Hi Pua here. Some wisdom words to be shared

Sometimes we have great goals in our minds. They seem unpractical in the eyes of others. Many DREAM THIEVES will try to convince us to stop from turning your goals into reality.

I have a dream which lies in the deepest level of my heart. Every time I try to share my view, I get nothing but harsh criticism. The only thing I can do is to build myself a shield, avoiding dream thieves to steal my passion away.

In my heart, even the journey is tens of thousands of miles, I believe the power of every single step. It can ultimately bring me there. If I fail to pull off my vision, at least I have made a try.(17/11/2010)
  

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Hello Pua. Hi Pua here. Some wisdom words to be shared : words of wisdom (or) wise words.

  • Hello Pua.
  • Hi Pua here.
  • Some wisdom words to be shared : words of wisdom (or) wise words.
  • Sometimes we have great goals in our minds.
  • They seem unpractical in the eyes of others.
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Hello Pua.

Hi Pua here. Some wisdom words to be shared : words of wisdom (or) wise words.


Sometimes we have great goals in our minds. They seem unpractical in the eyes of others. Many DREAM THIEVES will try to convince us to stop from turning your goals into reality. need to be consistent, also the phrase does not read well, try to rephrase it.

I have a dream which
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HI, thank you very for your grammar correction. They helped me a lot.

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