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Pitak Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing
Some help with C.V.
Hi I am trying to find a job here in u.k. and like someone to correct and give some advice on it, weateher this is too lomg or not substantial enough. thank you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the work experience of Part 1 Architectural Assistant at your practice, I personally very much admire the poetic quality and the spatial composition of your previous projects, particularly the “Grosz Residence” in Hampstead, London. With great passion and enthusiasm, I am highly determined and trust that a belief in my logic will contribute to your firm; herein I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration.
Through five years of studying architecture and design, I have developed good presentation skills and precision in detail design and the use of materials. My experiences include designing small Jewish community theatre in Venice and urban regeneration project in Old Havana, which involved working with local community and experiment with new materials. In addition to my degree in architecture I have also developed skills in customer service and team management while working in furniture department team at Habitat Ltd. With these qualities and strong belief in my abilities, I wish to become part of Jamie Fobert Architects team.
Please kindly consider my application, I am looking forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to meet you and show my work.
Yours faithfully,
Pitak Chaijumroonpun
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for the work experience of Part 1 Architectural Assistant at your practice, I personally very much admire the poetic quality and the spatial composition of your previous projects, particularly the “Grosz Residence” in Hampstead, London. With great passion and enthusiasm, I am highly determined and trust that a belief in my logic will contribute to your firm; herein I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration.
Through five years of studying architecture and design, I have developed good presentation skills and precision in detail design and the use of materials. My experiences include designing small Jewish community theatre in Venice and urban regeneration project in Old Havana, which involved working with local community and experiment with new materials. In addition to my degree in architecture I have also developed skills in customer service and team management while working in furniture department team at Habitat Ltd. With these qualities and strong belief in my abilities, I wish to become part of Jamie Fobert Architects team.
Please kindly consider my application, I am looking forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to meet you and show my work.
Yours faithfully,
Pitak Chaijumroonpun
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Dear Sir: I am writing to apply for your position Part 1 Architectural Assistant. V. for your consideration.
- Dear Sir: I am writing to apply for your position Part 1 Architectural Assistant.
- V.
- for your consideration.
- I have tremendous respect for your poetic quality and spatial composition of your previous projects, particularly the “Grosz Residence” in Hampstead, London.
- ] Through five years of studying architecture and design, I have developed good presentation skills and precision in detail design and the use of materials.
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Dear Sir:
I am writing to apply for your position Part 1 Architectural Assistant. I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration.
I have tremendous respect for your poetic quality and spatial composition of your previous projects, particularly the “Grosz Residence” in Hampstead, London. [You should see if you can strengthen this paragraph.]
Through five years of st
I am writing to apply for your position Part 1 Architectural Assistant. I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration.
I have tremendous respect for your poetic quality and spatial composition of your previous projects, particularly the “Grosz Residence” in Hampstead, London. [You should see if you can strengthen this paragraph.]
Through five years of st
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