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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Some help on proof-reading
Hello everyone,
I just translated the values of a school and I thought I would ask you to revise them and tell me if they're all right.
Values
Honesty: To act with ethics, veracity, justice, and rectitude before the entire educational community, that is, parents, teaching staff, children and teenagers, keeping in mind
Responsibility: To assume the compromises and results of our decisions and actions.
Teamwork: Through participation and spirit of collaboration.
Constant learning: knowledge, training and permanent updating to face challenges and changes.
Perseverance: Hard work, compromise and constant improvement to provide timely answers.
Innovation: To strive to provide creative solutions and investigative spirit to satisfy our costumers’ needs.
Optimism: To believe and think positively to respond to our compromises.
Quality: To do things right form the first time, meeting the established requirements.
Excellence: To exceed the compliance of the established requirements.
Transcendence: To live with the purpose of leaving a positive and indelible mark.
Thank you in advance,
E-
I just translated the values of a school and I thought I would ask you to revise them and tell me if they're all right.
Values
Honesty: To act with ethics, veracity, justice, and rectitude before the entire educational community, that is, parents, teaching staff, children and teenagers, keeping in mind
Responsibility: To assume the compromises and results of our decisions and actions.
Teamwork: Through participation and spirit of collaboration.
Constant learning: knowledge, training and permanent updating to face challenges and changes.
Perseverance: Hard work, compromise and constant improvement to provide timely answers.
Innovation: To strive to provide creative solutions and investigative spirit to satisfy our costumers’ needs.
Optimism: To believe and think positively to respond to our compromises.
Quality: To do things right form the first time, meeting the established requirements.
Excellence: To exceed the compliance of the established requirements.
Transcendence: To live with the purpose of leaving a positive and indelible mark.
Thank you in advance,
E-
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Hi Esneider, I corrected some mistakes in your translation, as seen below, otherwise it is very good. I wasn't so sure about some parts, what language was the original passage in? Values Honesty: To act with ethics, veracity, justice, and rectitude before the entire educational community, that is keeping in mind parents, teaching staff, children, and teenagers, Responsibility: To assume the consequences and results of our decisions and actions.
- Hi Esneider, I corrected some mistakes in your translation, as seen below, otherwise it is very good.
- I wasn't so sure about some parts, what language was the original passage in?
- Values Honesty: To act with ethics, veracity, justice, and rectitude before the entire educational community, that is keeping in mind parents, teaching staff, children, and teenagers, Responsibility: To assume the consequences and results of our decisions and actions.
- Teamwork: Through participation and a spirit of collaboration.
- Constant learning: Knowledge, training, and updating to face challenges and changes.
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Hi Esneider,
I corrected some mistakes in your translation, as seen below, otherwise it is very good. I wasn't so sure about some parts, what language was the original passage in?
Values
Honesty: To act with ethics, veracity, justice, and rectitude before the entire educational community, that is keeping in mind parents, teaching staff, children, and teenagers,
Responsibility
I corrected some mistakes in your translation, as seen below, otherwise it is very good. I wasn't so sure about some parts, what language was the original passage in?
Values
Honesty: To act with ethics, veracity, justice, and rectitude before the entire educational community, that is keeping in mind parents, teaching staff, children, and teenagers,
Responsibility
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Hi Shi Aina,
The original passage was in Spanish. I have to to apologize for posting a thread without revising every single word. It seems to me that a couple of the mistakes you corrected were actually a matter of my tiredness at that moment; they kind of slipped my sleepy mind. Compromise or commitment in achieving the school's objectives?
Thank you for your help,
E-
The original passage was in Spanish. I have to to apologize for posting a thread without revising every single word. It seems to me that a couple of the mistakes you corrected were actually a matter of my tiredness at that moment; they kind of slipped my sleepy mind. Compromise or commitment in achieving the school's objectives?
Thank you for your help,
E-
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