Some help needed - Application Letter an Resume

0Hello Everybody! Could you please read over and correct my letter of application and resume? I would like to go to USA for an internship. Did you find this application letter interesting?02br
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00What I could do else to make these better?02br
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00Thank you in advance for your attention to my post, your help and constructive critic.02br
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00Maria02br
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00MY LETTER OF APPLICATION:02br
00Dear Ms. X:02br
00I am writing to express my interest in the 12 to 18 month internship with [company name]. I learned about this opportunity while viewing the [company name] web page. I believe I have the background and qualifications you are seeking in an intern. 02br
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00I have gained practical experience and developed horsemanship skills working with horses at ‘Horse Training Center’ in CITY (COUNTRY), specialized in young animals training, mostly trotters, many of which are very famous now. The leader and the owner of the place is a veterinarian, equine practitioner. I have learned about health care of horses both from him and through my private interest. I have also gain hands-on experience taking care of and training private horses from stables around my city since I started university. I have also taken a part in some dressage competitions on horses trained by me with really good results. 02br
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00During the course of my PhD studies I have obtained essential practical experience as a scientist as well as a team worker. I am a good observer and very patient and a quick learner. Probable these attributes of my character allowed me to be a good listener, have excellent relationships with people and superb communication skills.02br
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00Also, I love working with young or difficult horses. Clear progress of their ability to match requirements gives me satisfaction and is the most rewarding part of my work. I am confident that I can be an active, open-minded and useful member of your team. I believe the combination of my academic background and practical horse handling experience will help me to contribute to the ongoing success of your company during my internship. 02br
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00I look forward to hearing from you.02br
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00MY RESUME:02br
00Objective 02br
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00Willing to increase knowledge in equine exercise physiology, gain experience in horse nutrition working side by side with top equine nutritionists. To become a competent researcher, acquainted with different laboratory and research methods.02br
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00Skills And Accomplishments:02br
00· Experienced in horse healthcare ranging from preventative to clinical care. 02br
00· Competent rider and trainer of horses.02br
00· Widely recognized as an excellent horse care provider. 02br
00· Detail oriented and resourceful in the completion of tasks with ability to multi-task effectively. 02br
00· Effective independently or as a member of the team to reach objectives. 02br
00· Dedicated individual achieving a reputation for consistently going beyond what is required. 02br
00· Excellent interpersonal and communication skills. 02br
00· Proficient in programs of Microsoft Office. 02br
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00Work Experience02br
00· Lecturer Assistant 02br
01i00October 2003– June 200602i02br
00Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Biochemistry and Physiology.University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY. 02br
00Demonstrated outstanding ability to organize, manage and supervise coordinate work in laboratory. Exhibited capability to work both independently and as a team. Presented effective communication skills with a wide range of personalities. 02br
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00· Veterinary Assistant (voluntary work), Caretaker and Horse Trainer 02br
01i00June - October 200502i02br
00Horse Training Center, CITY, COUNTRY. 02br
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00Demonstrated knowledge of technical competencies such as collecting and processing of blood samples and preparation for and assistance in surgeries. Under veterinary supervision injected animals with required medicines and immunizations. Maintained stalls clean, fed and watered animals. Provided excellent horse care and riding skills. 02br
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00· Lecturer in Public Health 02br
01i00September 2004 – June 200502i02br
001st Non-Public Medical College in CITY, CITY, COUNTRY. 02br
00Thrived on working with people and helping students achieve their objectives. 02br
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00· Lifeguard 02br
01i00Summer job: 2002, 2003, 2004, 200602i02br
00COMPANY, CITY, STATE, USA. 02br
00Presented strong work ethic and high quality performance. Confirmed very good customer and co-worker relations and communication skills. 02br
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00Education02br
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00· PhD student02br
01i002003 – Present02i02br
00Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Physiology. University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY. 02br
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00· Master of Science (Biochemistry) 02br
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00Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Physiology. University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY. 02br
00Majors: biochemistry, physiology, microbiology, genetics and cellular biology.02br
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00Publications02br
00· LastName Initial., Year. Title of the article. Journal Name, Pages.02br
00· LastName Initial., Year. Title of the article. Journal Name, Pages.02br
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00Personal details02br
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00My hobbies include studying, horse-riding and fencing. I am well versed with Word, Excel, PowerPoint.0-