SOME HARD SENTENCES I'VE ATTEMPTED TO CORRECT?

Could you please tell me what you think of my corrections and if wrong help correct them?

- If you are looking for comfort, you might not like this establishment as much as someone who's looking for a friendly environment. OK
- This is the first time I've seen them recruit/recruiting since I started working here. NOT SURE
- Look at the way/how she walks. BOTH
- I live at the stop right before the subway line forks. (metro line forks after X station, I live before it) NOT SURE
- She's the type of person who thinks everyone's looking at her. NOT SURE OF TENSE
- There are10 different shap(ed) rubber bands. SHAPED
- That story would make (for) a good book. BOTH
- The weather isn't cold enough to get water the freeze. ??

Thank you