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Ben9108 Posted 8 years ago
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Soliciting comments for using a word of suffering
I would like to solicit comments on the sentences below whether it is required to use a word “suffering” or not.
- Lacking maintenance of chiller plant such as replacement of lubricant oil for the chiller could be an increased risk of service interruption of the data center.
- Lacking maintenance of chiller plant such as replacement of lubricant oil for the chiller could be an increased risk of suffering service interruption of the data center.
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Ben9108 would like to solicit comments on the sentences below whether it is required to use a word “suffering” or not. 'Suffering' should not be included, but your sentences are otherwise wrong. Poor chiller plant maintenance, such as failure to replace lubricant, creates an increased risk of data center service interruption.
- Ben9108 would like to solicit comments on the sentences below whether it is required to use a word “suffering” or not.
- 'Suffering' should not be included, but your sentences are otherwise wrong.
- Poor chiller plant maintenance, such as failure to replace lubricant, creates an increased risk of data center service interruption.
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Ben9108would like to solicit comments on the sentences below whether it is required to use a word “suffering” or not.
'Suffering' should not be included, but your sentences are otherwise wrong.
Poor chiller plant maintenance, such as failure to replace lubricant, creates an increased risk of data center service interruption.
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