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Contiluo Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Softshell

Please help me make the following paragraph sound natural. Thanks a lot!

Since you’re leaving for UCLA staying for two months at the end of February when the weather there is still wintery, you’d better get some new winter clothing to keep warm just in case of cold snap. However, staying warm doesn’t just mean dressing like a bear. As I see most of your winter clothing seem to be in favor of thick layer and heavy-weight, they make you uncomfortable while you’re dressing them and they are hard to clean and dry. Why not choose to buy functional clothing featuring light-weight, keep warm, dry-fit, quick-dry, and breathable products? Wearing loose, light-weight clothes , one layer on top of another , is better than a single heavy layer of clothing. Therefore, I have bought you a base layer, a mid layer, and a softshell overcoat. Both layers feature moisture-wicking and sweat-siphoning function, and the softshell overcoat harmonizes water repellent, air permeable, breathable, highly mobile function and stylish design. I hope you will like them so as to have the right clothing to stay warm and dry regardless of the chilly weather in L.A.
  
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