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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Social studies

These were ancient foods and jobs in Ancient Greece. These were Ancient foods in Ancient Greece. Some of the Ancient Greece dipped their bread in wine along with some food on the side. For example, figs, cheese, dried fish, shellfish, beef and grapes. They also had vegetables and fresh food. An example of dessert was honey cakes made with real natural honey. Also there were some crops. For example, they had barley, grains and wheat. These foods are what Ancient Greeks ate in Ancient Greece.
Here were some jobs in Ancient Greece. For example, businessmen, farmers, housework, soldiers in the army teachers and musician. Here were the people who were famous for. Hippocrates - known as the father of medicine. Socrates- was the philosopher. Pythagoras- was the first pure mathematician. Archimedes- was the greatest mathematician and leading scientist. Homer- was the greatest poet and writer. Sophocles- wrote plays for Greek traditions. Plato- was the student of Socrates, philosopher and a mathematician. Aristotle- was the student of Plato, teacher of Alexander the Great, philosopher. These are the exciting jobs in Ancient Greece! :]

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There are actually no serious mistakes in grammar except that two of your sentences don't have verbs. However, you have a lot to learn about writing style, and hopefully your teacher will discuss this with you at length after you submit your essay.

  • There are actually no serious mistakes in grammar except that two of your sentences don't have verbs.
  • However, you have a lot to learn about writing style, and hopefully your teacher will discuss this with you at length after you submit your essay.
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There are actually no serious mistakes in grammar except that two of your sentences don't have verbs. However, you have a lot to learn about writing style, and hopefully your teacher will discuss this with you at length after you submit your essay.

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