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Anon006 Posted 5 years ago
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Social agriculturist

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Innate social agriculturist doing his best to level the fields for the greater good of all people.

  

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anon006 Is this okay: No. It is not a sentence, for one thing; there is no predicate. It is not easy to see how a social agriculturist, whatever that may be, can be innate.

  • anon006 Is this okay: No.
  • It is not a sentence, for one thing; there is no predicate.
  • It is not easy to see how a social agriculturist, whatever that may be, can be innate.
  • It sounds like you mean to use the expression "level the playing field", meaning "create the conditions for fair competition", but we have an agriculturist here, who presumably might actually hop on a bulldozer and literally level a field, so the meaning becomes a mystery.
  • "All people" is redundant with "greater good", which mean "the good of the masses".
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anon006Is this okay:

No. It is not a sentence, for one thing; there is no predicate. It is not easy to see how a social agriculturist, whatever that may be, can be innate. It sounds like you mean to use the expression "level the playing field", meaning "create the conditions for fair competition", but we have an agriculturist here, who presumably might actu

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