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Jumanah Posted 10 years ago
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Soccer game

Soccer game is the most played game.
Newcastle played very well against Arsenal in the championship soccer game last week. The game was very exciting that all spectators were cheering loudly. The playground was extremely crowded with exciting spectators. Finally, we didn't expect Arsenal would beat Newcastle until Arsenal got more goals than Arsenal did.
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Jumanah until Arsenal got more goals than Arsenal did. Does it make any sense? Shouldn't it be "...

  • Jumanah until Arsenal got more goals than Arsenal did.
  • Does it make any sense?
  • Shouldn't it be "...
  • "?
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Jumanah until Arsenal got more goals than Arsenal did.
Does it make any sense? Shouldn't it be "... until Arsenal got more goals than Newcastle did."?
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Soccer is the most played game.
Newcastle played very well against Arsenal in the championship game last week. The game was very exciting and all the excited spectators were cheering loudly. The stadium was extremely crowded. We didn't expect Arsenal would beat Newcastle
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'....in the Premier League match last week.'

'We didn't expect Arsenal to win but they beat Newcastle one nil.'
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Soccer is the most played game.
Arsenal played very well against Newcastle in the premier league match last week. The game was very exciting that all spectators were cheering loudly. The stadium was very crowded. In conclusion, we didn't expect expect Newcastle to win but they beat Arsenal one nil.
Is this fine?
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Not quite.
Soccer is the most played game.
Arsenal played very well against Newcastle in the premier league match last week. The game was so exciting that all of the spectators were cheering loudly. The stadium was very crowded. In conclusion, we didn't expect expect Newcastle to win but they beat Arsenal one nil.
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See my post for the actual result of the match.

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