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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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So, your trip is near its end.

Please correct the following text:

So, your trip is near its end. I believe this time it will be little hard for you to adjust once you come back to London. This time you had a lot of fun there. Yesterday, Maggie was watching that movie XYZ. I watched it too, not every single scene, just skipping the scenes, it's such a crap movie. I don't what kind of movies they are making these days. The same DVD also had Doe's I'm Rich it was also boring.
  

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This appears to be a simple, casual message to a friend, Jackson. Send it as it is; the message is easily understandable, and the friend knows your true English ability.

  • This appears to be a simple, casual message to a friend, Jackson.
  • Send it as it is; the message is easily understandable, and the friend knows your true English ability.
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This appears to be a simple, casual message to a friend, Jackson. Send it as it is; the message is easily understandable, and the friend knows your true English ability.
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Mr Micawber, I simply made up this post and other two (which have your same reply) to improve my English. So it will be kind of you if you do the corrections.
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Then write something more formal.

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