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Square Posted 12 years ago
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so (it) requires a global response
"Money laundering is a global issue so requires a global response, but with the current global financial crisis taking hold banks cannot get complacent and view their compliance team as just another cost centre."
Source: "Keeping clean", VNECONOMY.
I feel uncomfortable with the sentence above. It seems to me that the subject after "so" is missing.
I would correct it as follows.
Money laundering is a global issue so it requires a global response, but with the current global financial crisis taking hold banks cannot get complacent and view their compliance team as just another cost centre.
Do you agree?
Thanks.
Source: "Keeping clean", VNECONOMY.
I feel uncomfortable with the sentence above. It seems to me that the subject after "so" is missing.
I would correct it as follows.
Money laundering is a global issue so it requires a global response, but with the current global financial crisis taking hold banks cannot get complacent and view their compliance team as just another cost centre.
Do you agree?
Thanks.
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Square "Money laundering is a global issue so requires a global response, but with the current global financial crisis taking hold banks cannot get complacent and view their compliance team as just another cost centre. I feel uncomfortable with the sentence above. It seems to me that the subject after "so" is missing.
- Square "Money laundering is a global issue so requires a global response, but with the current global financial crisis taking hold banks cannot get complacent and view their compliance team as just another cost centre.
- I feel uncomfortable with the sentence above.
- It seems to me that the subject after "so" is missing.
- I would correct it as follows This is not a grammatical sentence in my opinion.
- English publication should be proof-read by someone with good English, but in non-English speaking developing countries, local English publications may be lacking in this area, and editor often unknowingly printed materials with syntactical and grammatical errors .
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Square"Money laundering is a global issue so requires a global response, but with the current global financial crisis taking hold banks cannot get complacent and view their compliance team as just another cost centre."Source: "Keeping clean", VNECO
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