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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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So far I was waiting for you, till my time up

I was waiting for one of my friend in a social networking site for a chat, but he didn't show up till my time up. So I left her message before I logged out, "So far I was waiting for you, but now my time is up, I'm leaving".

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User_gary I was waiting for one of my friend in a social networking site for a chat, but my time expired, and she still hadn't he didn't show up till my time up . So I left her a message before I logged out , : " So far I was waiting for you I waited for you all this time , but now my time is up, and I'm leaving".

  • User_gary I was waiting for one of my friend in a social networking site for a chat, but my time expired, and she still hadn't he didn't show up till my time up .
  • So I left her a message before I logged out , : " So far I was waiting for you I waited for you all this time , but now my time is up, and I'm leaving".
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User_garyI was waiting for one of my friend in a social networking site for a chat, but my time expired, and she still hadn't he didn't show up till my time up. So I left her a message before I logged out , : "So far I was waiting for you I waited for you all this time , but now my time

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