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Jemmali Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

smoking topic


In order to improve my English, I post this essay and I wish if someone kindly read it and give me some corrections and comments, thanks.

Nowadays, seen peoples (men, women and even children) smoking became more and more usual in all the glob nevertheless dangers that may causes towards health and personal budget.

With the regards to the all damages that caused by smoking towards the humans health (smoking is considered like a long time suicide), we cannot speak about its advantages accept these benefits collected by governments by imposing a tax on tobacco.

What is so incomprehensible with this habit is that the majorities of smokers are informed about the danger of smoking and its effects but they still persist in practicing it. By the way, what are the raisons that make these peoples in addiction for smoking?

From many scientists, addiction to smoking is not only caused by a chemicals ingredients existing in the cigarette ( ex : Nicotine, Ammoniac,…etc) , but also it can be a result of some personal wrongs behaviors coming for example from a lack of responsibility or from a feeling of to be different from others.

Even more smoking can be practice in order to stay thin, no doubt it is a wrong believe.

Finally, every one should keep in mind that smoking in the public area we harm not only ourselves but also we committing a crime on the freedom and on the health of others.



  

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Jemmali Normal 0 21 false false false FR X-NONE AR-SA MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 In order to improve my English, I post this essay and I wish if someone kindly read it and give me some corrections and comments, thanks. Nowadays, seen peoples (men, women and even children) smoking became more and more usual in all the glob nevertheless dangers that may causes towards health and personal budget. With the regards to the all damages that caused by smoking towards the humans health (smoking is considered like a long time suicide), we cannot speak about its advantages accept these benefits collected by governments by imposing a tax on tobacco.

  • Jemmali Normal 0 21 false false false FR X-NONE AR-SA MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 In order to improve my English, I post this essay and I wish if someone kindly read it and give me some corrections and comments, thanks.
  • Nowadays, seen peoples (men, women and even children) smoking became more and more usual in all the glob nevertheless dangers that may causes towards health and personal budget.
  • With the regards to the all damages that caused by smoking towards the humans health (smoking is considered like a long time suicide), we cannot speak about its advantages accept these benefits collected by governments by imposing a tax on tobacco.
  • What is so incomprehensible with this habit is that the majorities of smokers are informed about the danger of smoking and its effects but they still persist in practicing it.
  • By the way, what are the raisons that make these peoples in addiction for smoking?
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JemmaliNormal 0 21 false false false FR X-NONE AR-SA MicrosoftInternetExplorer4
In order to improve my English, I post this essay and I wish if someone kindly read it and give me some corrections and comments, thanks.

Nowadays, seen peoples (men, women and even children) smoking became more and more usual in a
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thank you so much i am haroon i mean my name is haroon i am from afghanistan i really read your topic it was so uesfull for me thank you man .....
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You've got a few mistakes with spelling for example you should write global / not glob

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