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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Smoking
The following sentences are self-made. I would like to use them for a notice for our hotel guests.
Could you please check if they sound natural? I need to be polite yet natural in writing.
Thank you for staying with us.
These days, cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building.
Smoking is not allowed in communal areas in the building.
Please restrict smoking to the designated area and properly dispose of cigarette butts in ashtrays. Dry winter increases fire danger
Your cooperation and fire prevention efforts are greatly appreciated.
Could you please check if they sound natural? I need to be polite yet natural in writing.
Thank you for staying with us.
These days, cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building.
Smoking is not allowed in communal areas in the building.
Please restrict smoking to the designated area and properly dispose of cigarette butts in ashtrays. Dry winter increases fire danger
Your cooperation and fire prevention efforts are greatly appreciated.
Top answer
Thank you for staying with us. Very good. These days, cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building.
- Thank you for staying with us.
- Very good.
- These days, cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building.
- This is very funny.
- Do you mean that people decorate the halls with their cigarette butts?
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Thank you for staying with us. Very good.
These days, cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building. This is very funny. Do you mean that people decorate the halls with their cigarette butts?
Smoking is not allowed in communal areas of the building.
(More common: Smoking is permitted only in clearly marked smoking areas.)
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These days, cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building. This is very funny. Do you mean that people decorate the halls with their cigarette butts?
Smoking is not allowed in communal areas of the building.
(More common: Smoking is permitted only in clearly marked smoking areas.)
Please rest
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Thank you very much for your corrections.
>>cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building.
That implies that guests throw away cigarette butts on the hallways,
and we often find cigarette ends thrown away these days.
How would you rephrase the sentence?
>>cigarette ends are found on the hallways in the building.
That implies that guests throw away cigarette butts on the hallways,
and we often find cigarette ends thrown away these days.
How would you rephrase the sentence?
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moguwai007How would you rephrase the sentence?We find discarded cigarette butts in the hallways.
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