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Meriam Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Smilling

Smiling is infectious you can catch it like the flu
when someone smiled at me I started smiling too
when I passed the corner someone saw my grin
when he smiled I realized I passed it onto him

I thought about that smile and realized its worth
a single smile just like mine could travel round the earth
so if you feel a smile begin don't leave it undetected
lets start an epidemic quick and get the world infected
  

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Hello there, Did you originally write this post? It's truly a nice one, meriam. [Y] Anyways, it sounds more like a poem rather than an essay.

  • Hello there, Did you originally write this post?
  • It's truly a nice one, meriam.
  • [Y] Anyways, it sounds more like a poem rather than an essay.
  • What say you?
  • Therefore, I kindly suggest you to post this kind of writings at the poetry section next time.
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Hello there,

Did you originally write this post? It's truly a nice one, meriam. [Y] Anyways, it sounds more like a poem rather than an essay. What say you? Therefore, I kindly suggest you to post this kind of writings at the poetry section next time. It's more appropriate, I think. Still, keep on writing and sharing these beautiful words, meriam. I totally love it! Cheers!
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Thank you, Meriam!

You gave me the smile bug, too!
A-Emotion: stars

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