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Macska Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Small letter correction?

I hope that after my 1000th letter, my English will get better.
Thank you for the correction.

My letter:
Dear Han Van,

Thank you for your quick answer. I can't confirm my accommodation for Marton A because it is too expensive for me:(. Please inform me, If I have any chance to apply for Moricz Z in the future or if you know a safe private accommodation alternative for an anti-alcoholic, no smoking, earnest IT student.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,
Ambrus Eszter

no-drinking means I don't like alcoholics, no smoking is the same.
  

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Dear Han Van, Thank you for your prompt response . I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for m e. Pl ease inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for a non-drinking, non-smoking , earnest IT student.

  • Dear Han Van, Thank you for your prompt response .
  • I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for m e.
  • Pl ease inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for a non-drinking, non-smoking , earnest IT student.
  • Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
  • Sincerely yours, Ambrus Eszter
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Dear Han Van,

Thank you for your prompt response. I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for me.

Please inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for

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