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Macska Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Small letter correction?
I hope that after my 1000th letter, my English will get better.
Thank you for the correction.
My letter:
Dear Han Van,
Thank you for your quick answer. I can't confirm my accommodation for Marton A because it is too expensive for me:(. Please inform me, If I have any chance to apply for Moricz Z in the future or if you know a safe private accommodation alternative for an anti-alcoholic, no smoking, earnest IT student.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Ambrus Eszter
no-drinking means I don't like alcoholics, no smoking is the same.
Thank you for the correction.
My letter:
Dear Han Van,
Thank you for your quick answer. I can't confirm my accommodation for Marton A because it is too expensive for me:(. Please inform me, If I have any chance to apply for Moricz Z in the future or if you know a safe private accommodation alternative for an anti-alcoholic, no smoking, earnest IT student.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Ambrus Eszter
no-drinking means I don't like alcoholics, no smoking is the same.
Top answer
Dear Han Van, Thank you for your prompt response . I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for m e. Pl ease inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for a non-drinking, non-smoking , earnest IT student.
- Dear Han Van, Thank you for your prompt response .
- I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for m e.
- Pl ease inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for a non-drinking, non-smoking , earnest IT student.
- Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
- Sincerely yours, Ambrus Eszter
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Dear Han Van,
Thank you for your prompt response. I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for me.
Please inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for
Thank you for your prompt response. I cannot confirm my accommodation at Marton A because it is too expensive for me.
Please inform me whether I would have any chance of applying for Moricz Z in the future or whether you know of a safe private alternative accommodation for
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