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Englishlearner Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Small Incident Description
Here I am describing small incident. Kindly correct me.
"My son was playing with the toy gun. He hit the gun on to the ground. Its trigger broken and fallen off. Now, he wants to have a new gun so he is crying."
Do correct me if I am wrong somewhere or tell me the better way using better words of saying this.
"My son was playing with the toy gun. He hit the gun on to the ground. Its trigger broken and fallen off. Now, he wants to have a new gun so he is crying."
Do correct me if I am wrong somewhere or tell me the better way using better words of saying this.
Top answer
My son was playing with a toy gun when he suddenly bashed it on the ground. The trigger fell off. Now he is crying because it is broken and he wants a new one!
- My son was playing with a toy gun when he suddenly bashed it on the ground.
- The trigger fell off.
- Now he is crying because it is broken and he wants a new one!
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My son was playing with a toy gun when he suddenly bashed it on the ground. The trigger fell off. Now he is crying because it is broken and he wants a new one!
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