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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Sm Business Apology for increase rates
0 My in laws have a very small pool business (about 18-20 pools) and I am trying to write an apology letter for increase in rates/ less service due to cost of gas costs, costs of living, supplies etc. I think what I have so far is good but i think it needs a little more but I have stumped myself. Please help with any ideas. We don't want to lose any customers for them. Thank you! 02 br
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00 This is what I have so far.. 02 br
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00 "We regret to inform you that due to the increase in gas costs and service supplies, we must unfortunately raise the cost of our services to you or decrease pool service to once weekly. We have avoided raising our prices for as long as possible, but we can no longer prolong the inevitable. Please let us know of your decision. 02 br
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00 We wish to thank you for your valued business and know that you will understand the necessity for this change." 0-
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00 This is what I have so far.. 02 br
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00 "We regret to inform you that due to the increase in gas costs and service supplies, we must unfortunately raise the cost of our services to you or decrease pool service to once weekly. We have avoided raising our prices for as long as possible, but we can no longer prolong the inevitable. Please let us know of your decision. 02 br
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00 We wish to thank you for your valued business and know that you will understand the necessity for this change." 0-
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0 I think it is fine, Anon. All I would do is eliminate one sentence ('Please let us know of your decision'), plus a few other changes in bold below: 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 We regret to inform you that 01 b 00 because of 02 b 00 the increase in gas costs and service supplies, we 01 b 00 unfortunately must 02 b 00 raise the cost of our services to you or decrease pool service to once weekly. We have avoided raising our prices for as long as possible, but we can no longer 01 b 00 avoid/postpone 02 b 00 the inevitable.
- 0 I think it is fine, Anon.
- All I would do is eliminate one sentence ('Please let us know of your decision'), plus a few other changes in bold below: 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 We regret to inform you that 01 b 00 because of 02 b 00 the increase in gas costs and service supplies, we 01 b 00 unfortunately must 02 b 00 raise the cost of our services to you or decrease pool service to once weekly.
- We have avoided raising our prices for as long as possible, but we can no longer 01 b 00 avoid/postpone 02 b 00 the inevitable.
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0 I think it is fine, Anon. All I would do is eliminate one sentence ('Please let us know of your decision'), plus a few other changes in bold below: 02 br
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01 i 00 We regret to inform you that 01 b 00 because of 02 b 00 the increase in gas costs and service supplies, we 01 b 00 unfortunately must 02 b 00 raise the cost of our services
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01 i 00 We regret to inform you that 01 b 00 because of 02 b 00 the increase in gas costs and service supplies, we 01 b 00 unfortunately must 02 b 00 raise the cost of our services
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